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by: W.Dockery - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 16:01 UTC

Carload of Poets

A carload of poets injured on the highway
in the late afternoon.

The smell of the lumbertard pine on 280
aromatic breeze fills my car
as I observe this.

Splat faries scattered
little bloody notebooks and pens.

Mexican air conditioner shrill
blasting my ears
affrecting my mind with this sight.

Shrivelled red baloon in a tree
near this horrible mess of wounded kids.

-Will Dockery (Summer 1996)

----
From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:

https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/10/carload-of-poets.html

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by: NancyGene - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 18:35 UTC

On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 4:05:12 PM UTC, Will Dockery wrote:
> Carload of Poets
>
> A carload of poets injured on the highway
> in the late afternoon.
>
> The smell of the lumbertard pine on 280
> aromatic breeze fills my car
> as I observe this.
>
> Splat faries scattered
> little bloody notebooks and pens.
>
> Mexican air conditioner shrill
> blasting my ears
> affrecting my mind with this sight.
>
> Shrivelled red baloon in a tree
> near this horrible mess of wounded kids.
>
> -Will Dockery (Summer 1996)

At first glace at the post, we thought this must be the work of one of the imposters. However, it seems to actually come from the high school dropout Will Dockery. We love the irony of "lumbertard," which certainly describes Will as a worker at that business. There are an assortment of other idiot mistakes which we will not point out because we have no desire to see Dockery correct them. Let them stand as a monument to his stupidity.

It's not a poem.

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by: Will Dockery - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 18:46 UTC

On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 1:35:19 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 4:05:12 PM UTC, Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > Carload of Poets
> >
> > A carload of poets injured on the highway
> > in the late afternoon.
> >
> > The smell of the lumberyard pine on 280
> > aromatic breeze fills my car
> > as I observe this.
> >
> > Splat faries scattered
> > little bloody notebooks and pens.
> >
> > Mexican air conditioner shrill
> > blasting my ears
> > affrecting my mind with this sight.
> >
> > Shrivelled red baloon in a tree
> > near this horrible mess of wounded kids.
> >
> > -Will Dockery (Summer 1996)
> At first glace

At first "glace"?

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by: NancyGene - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 18:48 UTC

On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 6:46:02 PM UTC, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 1:35:19 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> > On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 4:05:12 PM UTC, Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> > > Carload of Poets
> > >
> > > A carload of poets injured on the highway
> > > in the late afternoon.
> > >
> > > The smell of the lumberyard pine on 280
> > > aromatic breeze fills my car
> > > as I observe this.
> > >
> > > Splat faries scattered
> > > little bloody notebooks and pens.
> > >
> > > Mexican air conditioner shrill
> > > blasting my ears
> > > affrecting my mind with this sight.
> > >
> > > Shrivelled red baloon in a tree
> > > near this horrible mess of wounded kids.
> > >
> > > -Will Dockery (Summer 1996)
> > At first glace
> At first "glace"?
>
> :)
At second glance, the writing still has significant mistakes, and not just the lumbertard.

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by: Will Dockery - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 18:55 UTC

On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 1:48:35 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
>
> At second glance, the writing still has significant mistakes

Thanks for reading and commenting, NancyGene, any corrections you have to offer are appreciated.

:I've made some corrections:

https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/10/carload-of-poets.html

Carload of Poets

A carload of poets injured on the highway
in the late afternoon.

The smell of the lumberyard pine on 280
aromatic breeze fills my car
as I observe this.

Splat faries scattered
little bloody notebooks and pens.

Mexican air conditioner shrill
blasting my ears
affecting my mind with this sight.

shrivelled red balloon in a tree
near this horrible mess of wounded kids.

-Will Dockery (Summer 1996)

HTH and HAND.

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by: NancyGene - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 19:02 UTC

On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 6:55:48 PM UTC, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 1:48:35 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> >
> > At second glance, the writing still has significant mistakes
> Thanks for reading and commenting, NancyGene, any corrections you have to offer are appreciated.
>
> :I've made some corrections:
>
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/10/carload-of-poets.html
> Carload of Poets
>
> A carload of poets injured on the highway
> in the late afternoon.
>
> The smell of the lumberyard pine on 280
> aromatic breeze fills my car
> as I observe this.
>
> Splat faries scattered
> little bloody notebooks and pens.
>
> Mexican air conditioner shrill
> blasting my ears
> affecting my mind with this sight.
>
> shrivelled red balloon in a tree
> near this horrible mess of wounded kids.
>
> -Will Dockery (Summer 1996)
> HTH and HAND.

Nope, try again with a dictionary by your side and a pair of Coke-bottle-bottom glasses on. We are your critic, not your editor.

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by: Michael Pendragon - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 19:08 UTC

On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 2:05:42 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 2:02:46 PM UTC-5, NancyGene wrote:
> >
> > Nope, try again with a dictionary by your side and a pair of Coke-bottle-bottom glasses on. We are your critic, not your editor.
> Well, thanks for the help you did give, NancyGene.

Here's a hint: your poem comprises 4 incomplete non-sentences, and one run-on non-sentence.

You need to consult more than a dictionary.

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by: Will Dockery - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 19:09 UTC

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Subject: Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery
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by: Ash Wurthing - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 23:07 UTC

On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 2:09:23 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 2:08:03 PM UTC-5, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> >
> > Here's a hint: your poem comprises 4 incomplete non-sentences, and one run-on non-sentence.
> >
> > You need to consult more than a dictionary.
> Okay, I'll work on that, thanks again for reading and commenting.

Wow-- not the poem but your response. Could it be a moment of clarity, composure and dignity?

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by: Edward Rochester Esq - Thu, 12 Jan 2023 23:10 UTC

On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 6:07:48 PM UTC-5, Ash Wurthing wrote:
> On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 2:09:23 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Thursday, January 12, 2023 at 2:08:03 PM UTC-5, michaelmalef...@gmail.com wrote:
> > >
> > > Here's a hint: your poem comprises 4 incomplete non-sentences, and one run-on non-sentence.
> > >
> > > You need to consult more than a dictionary.
> > Okay, I'll work on that, thanks again for reading and commenting.
> Wow-- not the poem but your response. Could it be a moment of clarity, composure and dignity?

....NO... that's due to the isolated vocal issue he is avoiding.

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by: Will Dockery - Fri, 13 Jan 2023 00:41 UTC

Yes, the poem is in need of a serious re-write.

Machines take me by surprise with great frequency. -- Alan Turing

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"Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	W.Dockery
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	NancyGene
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	Will Dockery
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	NancyGene
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	Will Dockery
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	NancyGene
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	Will Dockery
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	Michael Pendragon
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	Will Dockery
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	Ash Wurthing
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	Edward Rochester Esq.
Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery	Will Dockery