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by: Ilya Shambat - Tue, 21 Mar 2023 01:02 UTC

Hungering woman!
After many lean years
Hungry in heart
To point of tears -

Hungry for everything
That woman needs
Hungry for words
And hungry for deeds -

Hungry for kindness
Hungry for warmth
Hungry for love
To the point of remorse -

Hungry for whole
And for each part -
Hungry for soul
And hungry for heart!

Hungering woman!
You're never there
You say you need me
Then flee into air

Each day each week
I think and toil
Passion wells up
My blood comes to a boil

Waiting for you
Or simply your call
With my mind burning,
Nerves stretched out tall,

With cannons shooting
All through the lung,
With forks inserted
Into the tongue,

With gut contorted
With burning eyes
Hearing distorted
Throat bound by ties

With shaking ligaments -
Knees growing weak -
With all within me
Waiting to break -

With heart impaled
On the end of the knife.
Hungering woman!
You eat me alive!

Ilya Shambat
https://sites.google.com/view/ilyashambatpoetry

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by: ME - Tue, 21 Mar 2023 01:27 UTC

On Monday, 20 March 2023 at 21:02:14 UTC-4, Ilya Shambat wrote:
> Hungering woman!
> After many lean years
> Hungry in heart
> To point of tears -
>
> Hungry for everything
> That woman needs
> Hungry for words
> And hungry for deeds -
>
> Hungry for kindness
> Hungry for warmth
> Hungry for love
> To the point of remorse -
>
> Hungry for whole
> And for each part -
> Hungry for soul
> And hungry for heart!
>
> Hungering woman!
> You're never there
> You say you need me
> Then flee into air
>
> Each day each week
> I think and toil
> Passion wells up
> My blood comes to a boil
>
> Waiting for you
> Or simply your call
> With my mind burning,
> Nerves stretched out tall,
>
> With cannons shooting
> All through the lung,
> With forks inserted
> Into the tongue,
>
> With gut contorted
> With burning eyes
> Hearing distorted
> Throat bound by ties
>
> With shaking ligaments -
> Knees growing weak -
> With all within me
> Waiting to break -
>
> With heart impaled
> On the end of the knife.
> Hungering woman!
> You eat me alive!
>
> Ilya Shambat
> https://sites.google.com/view/ilyashambatpoetry

Damn ibish, you’ve got a real problem with women.

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by: NancyGene - Tue, 21 Mar 2023 11:00 UTC

On Tuesday, March 21, 2023 at 1:27:11 AM UTC, ME wrote:
> On Monday, 20 March 2023 at 21:02:14 UTC-4, Ilya Shambat wrote:
> > Hungering woman!
> > After many lean years
> > Hungry in heart
> > To point of tears -
> >
> > Hungry for everything
> > That woman needs
> > Hungry for words
> > And hungry for deeds -
> >
> > Hungry for kindness
> > Hungry for warmth
> > Hungry for love
> > To the point of remorse -
> >
> > Hungry for whole
> > And for each part -
> > Hungry for soul
> > And hungry for heart!
> >
> > Hungering woman!
> > You're never there
> > You say you need me
> > Then flee into air
> >
> > Each day each week
> > I think and toil
> > Passion wells up
> > My blood comes to a boil
> >
> > Waiting for you
> > Or simply your call
> > With my mind burning,
> > Nerves stretched out tall,
> >
> > With cannons shooting
> > All through the lung,
> > With forks inserted
> > Into the tongue,
> >
> > With gut contorted
> > With burning eyes
> > Hearing distorted
> > Throat bound by ties
> >
> > With shaking ligaments -
> > Knees growing weak -
> > With all within me
> > Waiting to break -
> >
> > With heart impaled
> > On the end of the knife.
> > Hungering woman!
> > You eat me alive!
> >
> > Ilya Shambat
> > https://sites.google.com/view/ilyashambatpoetry
> Damn ibish, you’ve got a real problem with women.

Ibish also has a problem with using articles. Ibish, "the" needs you and you need it.

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by: Zod - Tue, 21 Mar 2023 20:17 UTC

On Monday, March 20, 2023 at 9:02:14 PM UTC-4, Ilya Shambat wrote:
>
Excellent poem, Ilya... kudos....
> Hungering woman!
> After many lean years
> Hungry in heart
> To point of tears -
>
> Hungry for everything
> That woman needs
> Hungry for words
> And hungry for deeds -
>
> Hungry for kindness
> Hungry for warmth
> Hungry for love
> To the point of remorse -
>
> Hungry for whole
> And for each part -
> Hungry for soul
> And hungry for heart!
>
> Hungering woman!
> You're never there
> You say you need me
> Then flee into air
>
> Each day each week
> I think and toil
> Passion wells up
> My blood comes to a boil
>
> Waiting for you
> Or simply your call
> With my mind burning,
> Nerves stretched out tall,
>
> With cannons shooting
> All through the lung,
> With forks inserted
> Into the tongue,
>
> With gut contorted
> With burning eyes
> Hearing distorted
> Throat bound by ties
>
> With shaking ligaments -
> Knees growing weak -
> With all within me
> Waiting to break -
>
> With heart impaled
> On the end of the knife.
> Hungering woman!
> You eat me alive!
>
> Ilya Shambat
> https://sites.google.com/view/ilyashambatpoetry

Subject	Author
Hungry Woman	Ilya Shambat
Re: Hungry Woman	ME
Re: Hungry Woman	NancyGene
Re: Hungry Woman	Zod