Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
>
> "In other words, Michael Pendragon's judgment of poetry is a limited ability."

> You never left the 6th grade

Look who's talking, Jim Senetto, feeble minded cyberbully wannabe.

🙂

(Moved from the troll thread)

Michael Pendragon wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
> > Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > Will Dockery wrote:
> > >
> > > > I posted the poem:
> > "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery
> >
> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > >
> > > > A poetry discussion group meaning my poetry is on topic.
> > >
> > > Redirecting members to another site is detrimental to AAPC.
> > Not really.
>
> AAPC exist to give poets and poetry lovers a forum in which to *discuss* poetry

So why not discuss the poetry rather than your non-stop trolling and attack posts?

🙂

On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 7:21:06 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > Will Dockery wrote:
> > > Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > > > Will Dockery wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > I posted the poem:
> > > "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery
> > >
> > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > >
> > > > > A poetry discussion group meaning my poetry is on topic.
> > > >
> > > > Redirecting members to another site is detrimental to AAPC.
> > > Not really.
> >
> > AAPC exist to give poets and poetry lovers a forum in which to *discuss* poetry
> So why not discuss the poetry rather than your non-stop trolling and attack posts?

Okay, you claim your "Red Red Wine" poem is in the confessional/narrative style.

Please answer the following questions regarding it:

Could you set down the "narrative" in outline format?

Does having a narrative make a piece of writing a poem?

"Gone With the Wind" has a narrative. Does that make GWTW a poem?

Where are you confessing something in your poem?

What are you confessing in your poem?

Does writing something in a confessional manner make it a poem?

"Confessions of an English Opium-Eater" is written in a confessional manner.. Is "Confessions of an English Opium-Eater" a poem?

Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
>
> "I've been writing poetry for nearly fifty years, rest assured it's a poem, Pendragon."

That's correct.

(Moved from the troll thread.)

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 7:21:06 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> > > > > I posted the poem:
>> > > "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery
>> > >
>> > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>> > > >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> > > >
>> > > > > A poetry discussion group meaning my poetry is on topic.
>> > > >
>> > > > Redirecting members to another site is detrimental to AAPC.
>> > > Not really.
>> >
>> > AAPC exist to give poets and poetry lovers a forum in which to *discuss* poetry
>> So why not discuss the poetry rather than your non-stop trolling and attack posts?

> Okay, you claim your "Red Red Wine" poem is in the confessional/narrative style.

> Please answer the following questions regarding it:

> Could you set down the "narrative" in outline format?

The poem itself already does that, really.

On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 9:05:15 AM UTC-4, W.Dockery wrote:
> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>
> > On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 7:21:06 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >> Michael Pendragon wrote:
> >> > Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> >> > > > > I posted the poem:
> >> > > "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery
> >> > >
> >> > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> >> > > >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> >> > > >
> >> > > > > A poetry discussion group meaning my poetry is on topic.
> >> > > >
> >> > > > Redirecting members to another site is detrimental to AAPC.
> >> > > Not really.
> >> >
> >> > AAPC exist to give poets and poetry lovers a forum in which to *discuss* poetry
> >> So why not discuss the poetry rather than your non-stop trolling and attack posts?
>
> > Okay, you claim your "Red Red Wine" poem is in the confessional/narrative style.
>
> > Please answer the following questions regarding it:
>
> > Could you set down the "narrative" in outline format?
> The poem itself already does that, really.

No, Donkey, it doesn't.

In typical Dockery style, the poem rambles on incoherently and goes nowhere..

A narrative has a beginning, middle, and end; plot points; character development; a denouement; etc.

I don't see any of those story elements in your dribble.

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 9:05:15 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> >> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>> >> > Will Dockery wrote:
>> >
>> >> > > > > I posted the poem:
>> >> > > "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery
>> >> > >
>> >> > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>> >> > > >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> >> > > >
>> >> > > > > A poetry discussion group meaning my poetry is on topic.
>> >> > > >
>> >> > > > Redirecting members to another site is detrimental to AAPC.
>> >> > > Not really.
>> >> >
>> >> > AAPC exist to give poets and poetry lovers a forum in which to *discuss* poetry
>> >> So why not discuss the poetry rather than your non-stop trolling and attack posts?
>>
>> > Okay, you claim your "Red Red Wine" poem is in the confessional/narrative style.
>>
>> > Please answer the following questions regarding it:
>>
>> > Could you set down the "narrative" in outline format?
>> The poem itself already does that, really.

> No

Yes it does but I wouldn't expect an ignorant and delusional monkey like you to understand that.

HTH and HAND.

On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 9:50:14 AM UTC-4, W-Dockery wrote:
> Michael Pendragon wrote:
> > On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 9:05:15 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >> >> Michael Pendragon wrote:
> >> >> > Will Dockery wrote:
> >> >
> >> >> > > > > I posted the poem:
> >> >> > > "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery
> >> >> > >
> >> >> > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles..html?m=0
> >> >> > > >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> >> >> > > >
> >> >> > > > > A poetry discussion group meaning my poetry is on topic.
> >> >> > > >
> >> >> > > > Redirecting members to another site is detrimental to AAPC.
> >> >> > > Not really.
> >> >> >
> >> >> > AAPC exist to give poets and poetry lovers a forum in which to *discuss* poetry
> >> >> So why not discuss the poetry rather than your non-stop trolling and attack posts?
> >>
> >> > Okay, you claim your "Red Red Wine" poem is in the confessional/narrative style.
> >>
> >> > Please answer the following questions regarding it:
> >>
> >> > Could you set down the "narrative" in outline format?
> >> The poem itself already does that, really.
>
> > No
> Yes it does but I wouldn't expect an ignorant and delusional monkey like you to understand that.

If you're unable to provide an outline format of the supposed narrative, there is no point in pursuing this discussion any further.

You obvious don't know what narrative poetry is, don't understand what "narrative" means, and think that "poem" is a label you can stick on a piece of writing at will.

< plonk >

Coco DeSockmonkey wrote:

> On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 9:50:14 AM UTC-4, W-Dockery wrote:
>> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>> > On Friday, June 23, 2023 at 9:05:15 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>> >> >> Michael Pendragon wrote:
>> >> >> > Will Dockery wrote:
>> >> >
>> >> >> > > > > I posted the poem:
>> >> >> > > "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery
>> >> >> > >
>> >> >> > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles..html?m=0
>> >> >> > > >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> >> >> > > >
>> >> >> > > > > A poetry discussion group meaning my poetry is on topic.
>> >> >> > > >
>> >> >> > > > Redirecting members to another site is detrimental to AAPC.
>> >> >> > > Not really.
>> >> >> >
>> >> >> > AAPC exist to give poets and poetry lovers a forum in which to *discuss* poetry
>> >> >> So why not discuss the poetry rather than your non-stop trolling and attack posts?
>> >>
>> >> > Okay, you claim your "Red Red Wine" poem is in the confessional/narrative style.
>> >>
>> >> > Please answer the following questions regarding it:
>> >>
>> >> > Could you set down the "narrative" in outline format?
>> >> The poem itself already does that, really.
>>
>> > No
>> Yes it does but I wouldn't expect an ignorant and delusional monkey like you to understand that.

> If you're

As expected, the poem went over your head, Pendragon, you ignorant and delusional little fuckwit monkey.

HTH and HAND.

Michael Pendragon wrote:

> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 8:15:10 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
>>
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>>
>> Another recent (new) poem, as requested by Jim Senetto.

> Why do you

Why do you obsess so much, Michael Pendragon, you delusional little monkey?

🙂

> Little Miracles
>
> Her heart's so heavy
> with memory today.
> She can write it down as fiction
> but she doesn't know what to say.
> The cats are on the front porch
> they don't listen to her.

> What she sees are
> the little miracles
> that make up her life.
> Cell phone haikus
> to the ghost of her wife.
> Hipster concubines
> and neon that lights up the night
> it just don't seem right.

> Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> as Miss Twila takes note of it all.

> What she see is nine to five
> as she walks the last mile.
> Over and over like Groundhog day
> gathering her fingerprint file.
> Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> and just go out in style.

> The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> shadows white-out on white
> they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.

> Because her heart's so heavy
> with memory today.
> She can write it down as fiction
> but she doesn't know what to say.
> The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> in line to pay to play.

> -Will Dockery (3-21-23

> ----
> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

Reposted for ME, who said she missed all of my poetry.

Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
>>>
>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

> Little Miracles

> Her heart's so heavy
> with memory today.
> She can write it down as fiction
> but she doesn't know what to say.
> The cats are on the front porch
> they don't listen to her.

> What she sees are
> the little miracles
> that make up her life.
> Cell phone haikus
> to the ghost of her wife.
> Hipster concubines
> and neon that lights up the night
> it just don't seem right.

> Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> as Miss Twila takes note of it all.

> What she see is nine to five
> as she walks the last mile.
> Over and over like Groundhog day
> gathering her fingerprint file.
> Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> and just go out in style.

> The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> shadows white-out on white
> they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.

> Because her heart's so heavy
> with memory today.
> She can write it down as fiction
> but she doesn't know what to say.
> The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> in line to pay to play.

> -Will Dockery (3-21-23

> ----
> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

On second read, I rather like this one...

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:13:58 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 7:02:01 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:47:11 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:34:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:17:59 PM UTC-4, Edward Rochester Esq. wrote:
> > > > > On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 4:50:17 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > >
> > > > > > >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > > > > >>
> > > > > > >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > > > > If you want poetry to be read and/or discussed by anyone
> > > > > > > I suggest that you post it here in full.
> > > > > > Okay, here is the full poem:
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Little Miracles
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > > > > with memory today.
> > > > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > > > > they don't listen to her.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > What she sees are
> > > > > > the little miracles
> > > > > > that make up her life.
> > > > > > Cell phone haikus
> > > > > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > > > > Hipster concubines
> > > > > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > > > > it just don't seem right.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > What she see is nine to five
> > > > > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > > > > and just go out in style.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > > > > shadows white-out on white
> > > > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > > > > with memory today.
> > > > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > > > > in line to pay to play.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > > > > >
> > > > > > ----
> > > > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles..html?m=0
> > > > > Big or Little, I see no miracles in the above.
> > > > I wouldn't really expect you to, Senetto, you're boased against my poetry, as we know.
> > > > > It would take a miracle or a good dose of acid to figure out this lesbian relationship.
> > > > Have you even tried acid, Senetto?
> > > >
> > > > > Try again.
> > > >
> > > > Always... stay tuned for more poetry.
> > > What in the world does asking me if I've tried acid, mean?
> > You can't really understand the effects of LSD if you've never experienced it.
> >
> > The Beatles and the Rolling Stones used it, among many others, and it really didn't harm most of them at all.
> > > My comment on your 'poem' is my comment.
> > >
> > > You gave your child bride, acid
> > We were both young and wanted to try what the other kids were having fun with.
> >
> > So you were afraid to try it?
> >
> > If you were afraid, that's okay.
> > > I wonder if you'd feed your daughter or grandchild acid to see the pretty colors.
> > No, I would not.
> > > You're a burn-out, face facts.
> > Right, and at 76 years old you're as fresh as a daisy, face facts, you're an old codger just like me, Senetto.
> >
> > HTH and HAND.
> My young life was filled with spills and thrills, I didn't much care what the Beatles and Stones were up to, except the music

It is the music and the influence LSD and weed had on it, that I'm talking about.

On Saturday, June 24, 2023 at 2:40:15 PM UTC-4, General-Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> >>> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> >>>
> >>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > Little Miracles
>
> > Her heart's so heavy
> > with memory today.
> > She can write it down as fiction
> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > The cats are on the front porch
> > they don't listen to her.
>
> > What she sees are
> > the little miracles
> > that make up her life.
> > Cell phone haikus
> > to the ghost of her wife.
> > Hipster concubines
> > and neon that lights up the night
> > it just don't seem right.
>
> > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
>
> > What she see is nine to five
> > as she walks the last mile.
> > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > and just go out in style.
>
> > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > shadows white-out on white
> > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
>
> > Because her heart's so heavy
> > with memory today.
> > She can write it down as fiction
> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > in line to pay to play.
>
> > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
>
> > ----
> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> On second read, I rather like this one...

Thanks again for reading and commenting Zod, and welcome back.

On Tuesday, June 27, 2023 at 1:37:19 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> On Saturday, June 24, 2023 at 2:40:15 PM UTC-4, General-Zod wrote:
> > Will Dockery wrote:
> > >
> > >>> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > >>>
> > >>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > Little Miracles
> >
> > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > with memory today.
> > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > they don't listen to her.
> >
> > > What she sees are
> > > the little miracles
> > > that make up her life.
> > > Cell phone haikus
> > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > Hipster concubines
> > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > it just don't seem right.
> >
> > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> >
> > > What she see is nine to five
> > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > and just go out in style.
> >
> > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > shadows white-out on white
> > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> >
> > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > with memory today.
> > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > in line to pay to play.
> >
> > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> >
> > > ----
> > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > On second read, I rather like this one...
> Thanks again for reading and commenting Zod, and welcome back.

Good to be back...!

On Tuesday, June 27, 2023 at 12:01:41 PM UTC-4, Faraway Star wrote:
> On Tuesday, June 27, 2023 at 1:37:19 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Saturday, June 24, 2023 at 2:40:15 PM UTC-4, General-Zod wrote:
> > > Will Dockery wrote:
> > > >
> > > >>> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > >>>
> > > >>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > Little Miracles
> > >
> > > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > > with memory today.
> > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > > they don't listen to her.
> > >
> > > > What she sees are
> > > > the little miracles
> > > > that make up her life.
> > > > Cell phone haikus
> > > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > > Hipster concubines
> > > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > > it just don't seem right.
> > >
> > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > >
> > > > What she see is nine to five
> > > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > > and just go out in style.
> > >
> > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > > shadows white-out on white
> > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > >
> > > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > > with memory today.
> > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > > in line to pay to play.
> > >
> > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > >
> > > > ----
> > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > On second read, I rather like this one...
> > Thanks again for reading and commenting Zod, and welcome back.
> Good to be back...!

Great to have you back.

🙂

On Tuesday, June 27, 2023 at 12:01:41 PM UTC-4, Faraway Star wrote:
> On Tuesday, June 27, 2023 at 1:37:19 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> > On Saturday, June 24, 2023 at 2:40:15 PM UTC-4, General-Zod wrote:
> > > Will Dockery wrote:
> > > >
> > > >>> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> > > >>>
> > > >>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > > Little Miracles
> > >
> > > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > > with memory today.
> > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > > they don't listen to her.
> > >
> > > > What she sees are
> > > > the little miracles
> > > > that make up her life.
> > > > Cell phone haikus
> > > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > > Hipster concubines
> > > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > > it just don't seem right.
> > >
> > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > >
> > > > What she see is nine to five
> > > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > > and just go out in style.
> > >
> > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > > shadows white-out on white
> > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > >
> > > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > > with memory today.
> > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > > in line to pay to play.
> > >
> > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > >
> > > > ----
> > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > > On second read, I rather like this one...
> > Thanks again for reading and commenting Zod, and welcome back.
> Good to be back...!

Good morning my friend and welcome back.

🙂

On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:34:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > > Little Miracles
> > >
> > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > with memory today.
> > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > they don't listen to her.
> > >
> > > What she sees are
> > > the little miracles
> > > that make up her life.
> > > Cell phone haikus
> > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > Hipster concubines
> > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > it just don't seem right.
> > >
> > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > >
> > > What she see is nine to five
> > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > and just go out in style.
> > >
> > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > shadows white-out on white
> > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > >
> > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > with memory today.
> > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > in line to pay to play.
> > >
> > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > >
> > > ----
> > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

Third read out damn standing...

On Saturday, July 1, 2023 at 1:46:58 PM UTC-4, Faraway Star wrote:
> On Wednesday, June 14, 2023 at 5:34:14 PM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> > > > Little Miracles
> > > >
> > > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > > with memory today.
> > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > > they don't listen to her.
> > > >
> > > > What she sees are
> > > > the little miracles
> > > > that make up her life.
> > > > Cell phone haikus
> > > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > > Hipster concubines
> > > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > > it just don't seem right.
> > > >
> > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > > >
> > > > What she see is nine to five
> > > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > > and just go out in style.
> > > >
> > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > > shadows white-out on white
> > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > > >
> > > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > > with memory today.
> > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > > in line to pay to play.
> > > >
> > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > > >
> > > > ----
> > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> Third read out damn standing...

Thanks again for the nod, Faraway Star.

🙂

Will Dockery wrote:
> Faraway Star wrote:
> > Will Dockery wrote:
>
> > > > > Little Miracles
> > > > >
> > > > > Her heart's so heavy
> > > > > with memory today.
> > > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > > The cats are on the front porch
> > > > > they don't listen to her.
> > > > >
> > > > > What she sees are
> > > > > the little miracles
> > > > > that make up her life.
> > > > > Cell phone haikus
> > > > > to the ghost of her wife.
> > > > > Hipster concubines
> > > > > and neon that lights up the night
> > > > > it just don't seem right.
> > > > >
> > > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
> > > > >
> > > > > What she see is nine to five
> > > > > as she walks the last mile.
> > > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > > > > and just go out in style.
> > > > >
> > > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > > > > shadows white-out on white
> > > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
> > > > >
> > > > > Because her heart's so heavy
> > > > > with memory today.
> > > > > She can write it down as fiction
> > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > > > > in line to pay to play.
> > > > >
> > > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
> > > > >
> > > > > ----
> > > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > Third read out damn standing...
> Thanks again for the nod, Faraway Star.

Keep up great work...

Faraway Star wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>> Faraway Star wrote:
>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> > > > > Little Miracles
>> > > > >
>> > > > > Her heart's so heavy
>> > > > > with memory today.
>> > > > > She can write it down as fiction
>> > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
>> > > > > The cats are on the front porch
>> > > > > they don't listen to her.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > What she sees are
>> > > > > the little miracles
>> > > > > that make up her life.
>> > > > > Cell phone haikus
>> > > > > to the ghost of her wife.
>> > > > > Hipster concubines
>> > > > > and neon that lights up the night
>> > > > > it just don't seem right.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
>> > > > > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
>> > > > > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > What she see is nine to five
>> > > > > as she walks the last mile.
>> > > > > Over and over like Groundhog day
>> > > > > gathering her fingerprint file.
>> > > > > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
>> > > > > and just go out in style.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
>> > > > > shadows white-out on white
>> > > > > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > Because her heart's so heavy
>> > > > > with memory today.
>> > > > > She can write it down as fiction
>> > > > > but she doesn't know what to say.
>> > > > > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
>> > > > > in line to pay to play.
>> > > > >
>> > > > > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
>> > > > >
>> > > > > ----
>> > > > > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> > > > > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>> > Third read out damn standing...
>> Thanks again for the nod, Faraway Star.

> Keep up great work...

Hello there my friend.

On Saturday, June 24, 2023 at 2:40:15 PM UTC-4, General-Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
> >
> >>> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> >>>
> >>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> > Little Miracles
>
> > Her heart's so heavy
> > with memory today.
> > She can write it down as fiction
> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > The cats are on the front porch
> > they don't listen to her.
>
> > What she sees are
> > the little miracles
> > that make up her life.
> > Cell phone haikus
> > to the ghost of her wife.
> > Hipster concubines
> > and neon that lights up the night
> > it just don't seem right.
>
> > Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> > Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> > as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
>
> > What she see is nine to five
> > as she walks the last mile.
> > Over and over like Groundhog day
> > gathering her fingerprint file.
> > Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> > and just go out in style.
>
> > The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> > shadows white-out on white
> > they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
>
> > Because her heart's so heavy
> > with memory today.
> > She can write it down as fiction
> > but she doesn't know what to say.
> > The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> > in line to pay to play.
>
> > -Will Dockery (3-21-23
>
> > ----
> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
> On second read, I rather like this one...

Good morning, thanks again for the nod.

>>> Little Miracles
>
>>> Her heart's so heavy
>>> with memory today.
>>> She can write it down as fiction
>>> but she doesn't know what to say.
>>> The cats are on the front porch
>>> they don't listen to her.

>>> What she sees are
>>> the little miracles
>>> that make up her life.
>>> Cell phone haikus
>>> to the ghost of her wife.
>>> Hipster concubines
>>> and neon that lights up the night
>>> it just don't seem right.

>>> Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
>>> Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
>>> as Miss Twila takes note of it all.

>>> What she see is nine to five
>>> as she walks the last mile.
>>> Over and over like Groundhog day
>>> gathering her fingerprint file.
>>> Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
>>> and just go out in style.

>>> The downtown crown in a hologram fight
>>> shadows white-out on white
>>> they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.

>>> Because her heart's so heavy
>>> with memory today.
>>> She can write it down as fiction
>>> but she doesn't know what to say.
>>> The four horsemen of the apocalypse
>>> in line to pay to play.

>>> -Will Dockery

>>> ----
>>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>
>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

Again, comments and critique are always welcome.

🙂

Will Dockery wrote:
>
> >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery:
> >>
> >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>
> Little Miracles
>
> Her heart's so heavy
> with memory today.
> She can write it down as fiction
> but she doesn't know what to say.
> The cats are on the front porch
> they don't listen to her.
>
> What she sees are
> the little miracles
> that make up her life.
> Cell phone haikus
> to the ghost of her wife.
> Hipster concubines
> and neon that lights up the night
> it just don't seem right.
>
> Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
> Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
> as Miss Twila takes note of it all.
>
> What she see is nine to five
> as she walks the last mile.
> Over and over like Groundhog day
> gathering her fingerprint file.
> Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
> and just go out in style.
>
> The downtown crown in a hologram fight
> shadows white-out on white
> they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.
>
> Because her heart's so heavy
> with memory today.
> She can write it down as fiction
> but she doesn't know what to say.
> The four horsemen of the apocalypse
> in line to pay to play.
>
> -Will Dockery (3-21-23
>
> ----
> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

Third read quite superb in my reckoning...

Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>>> >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0
>>> >>
>>> >> "Little Miracles" by Will Dockery
>
>> Little Miracles

>> Her heart's so heavy
>> with memory today.
>> She can write it down as fiction
>> but she doesn't know what to say.
>> The cats are on the front porch
>> they don't listen to her.

>> What she sees are
>> the little miracles
>> that make up her life.
>> Cell phone haikus
>> to the ghost of her wife.
>> Hipster concubines
>> and neon that lights up the night
>> it just don't seem right.

>> Enlightened rouges break down the 4th wall
>> Zen dharma bums play psychic volley ball
>> as Miss Twila takes note of it all.

>> What she see is nine to five
>> as she walks the last mile.
>> Over and over like Groundhog day
>> gathering her fingerprint file.
>> Getting off on how easy it is to fake a smile
>> and just go out in style.

>> The downtown crown in a hologram fight
>> shadows white-out on white
>> they rolled up the streets and shut out the lights.

>> Because her heart's so heavy
>> with memory today.
>> She can write it down as fiction
>> but she doesn't know what to say.
>> The four horsemen of the apocalypse
>> in line to pay to play.

>> -Will Dockery

>> ----
>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/03/little-miracles.html?m=0

> HTH and HAND.

Having another read, solid wqrk...