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 by: W-Dockery - Mon, 20 Feb 2023 01:53 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Dark Whirlwind

>> The months
>> somehow turned happy
>> in the dark whirlwind
>> of 1985.

>> Although doom was certain
>> earlier that year.
>> Before Summer came
>> and was now drawing to an end.

>> Hot Summer nights
>> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..

>> Dark Summer nights in a room
>> in Cabbagetown
>> looking over the river.

>> I got a call on the
>> mill speaker phone.
>> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>> saying come down to the front.

>> So I headed downstairs
>> about a city block
>> to the front gates.

>> Dark whirlwind night
>> Carlton Culverson
>> the Plant Two supervisor
>> met me in the break room
>> with coffee.

>> Carlton said
>> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>> let her keep on going
>> this time.

>> He reminded me
>> I could have any woman in the mill
>> I wanted.
>> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>> on her."

>> I waved him off.
>> held my head down.
>> with furrowed brow.
>> and stepped back into the fray.

>> Into the taxi cab.
>> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>> excitement and smiles
>> as I got in with her.

>> "Hey there, cab driver
>> kick it, man.
>> Get us to Cabbagetown
>> get us to River Avenue on time."

>> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)

>> ***
>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

> Second read, well on the way to classichood...

Good evening my friend, thanks again for the nod.

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 by: Will Donkey - Mon, 20 Feb 2023 10:21 UTC

On Sunday, February 19, 2023 at 8:55:14 PM UTC-5, W-Dockery wrote:
> General-Zod wrote:
>
> > Will Dockery wrote:
> >>
> >> Dark Whirlwind
>
> >> The months
> >> somehow turned happy
> >> in the dark whirlwind
> >> of 1985.
>
> >> Although doom was certain
> >> earlier that year.
> >> Before Summer came
> >> and was now drawing to an end.
>
> >> Hot Summer nights
> >> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>
> >> Dark Summer nights in a room
> >> in Cabbagetown
> >> looking over the river.
>
> >> I got a call on the
> >> mill speaker phone.
> >> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
> >> saying come down to the front.
>
> >> So I headed downstairs
> >> about a city block
> >> to the front gates.
>
> >> Dark whirlwind night
> >> Carlton Culverson
> >> the Plant Two supervisor
> >> met me in the break room
> >> with coffee.
>
> >> Carlton said
> >> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
> >> let her keep on going
> >> this time.
>
> >> He reminded me
> >> I could have any woman in the mill
> >> I wanted.
> >> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
> >> on her."
>
> >> I waved him off.
> >> held my head down.
> >> with furrowed brow.
> >> and stepped back into the fray.
>
> >> Into the taxi cab.
> >> where she was in the back seat, crying.
> >> excitement and smiles
> >> as I got in with her.
>
> >> "Hey there, cab driver
> >> kick it, man.
> >> Get us to Cabbagetown
> >> get us to River Avenue on time."
>
> >> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>
>
> >> ***
> >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>
>
> > Second read, well on the way to classichood...
> Good evening my friend, thanks again for the nod.

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 by: Will Donkey - Mon, 20 Feb 2023 10:21 UTC

On Sunday, February 19, 2023 at 8:55:14 PM UTC-5, W-Dockery wrote:
> General-Zod wrote:
>
> > Will Dockery wrote:
> >>
> >> Dark Whirlwind
>
> >> The months
> >> somehow turned happy
> >> in the dark whirlwind
> >> of 1985.
>
> >> Although doom was certain
> >> earlier that year.
> >> Before Summer came
> >> and was now drawing to an end.
>
> >> Hot Summer nights
> >> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>
> >> Dark Summer nights in a room
> >> in Cabbagetown
> >> looking over the river.
>
> >> I got a call on the
> >> mill speaker phone.
> >> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
> >> saying come down to the front.
>
> >> So I headed downstairs
> >> about a city block
> >> to the front gates.
>
> >> Dark whirlwind night
> >> Carlton Culverson
> >> the Plant Two supervisor
> >> met me in the break room
> >> with coffee.
>
> >> Carlton said
> >> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
> >> let her keep on going
> >> this time.
>
> >> He reminded me
> >> I could have any woman in the mill
> >> I wanted.
> >> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
> >> on her."
>
> >> I waved him off.
> >> held my head down.
> >> with furrowed brow.
> >> and stepped back into the fray.
>
> >> Into the taxi cab.
> >> where she was in the back seat, crying.
> >> excitement and smiles
> >> as I got in with her.
>
> >> "Hey there, cab driver
> >> kick it, man.
> >> Get us to Cabbagetown
> >> get us to River Avenue on time."
>
> >> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>
>
> >> ***
> >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>
>
> > Second read, well on the way to classichood...
> Good evening my friend, thanks again for the nod.

***DISCLAIMER: THE FOLLOWING POEM IS ENTIRELY FICTIONAL. ANY SIMILARITIES TO PERSON OR PERSONS LIVING OR DEAD IS PURELY COINCIDENTAL.***

THE SAGA OF JORDAN T. CHASESCOTT

Uncle Isaac took his belt
And gave Young Jordy 40 welts.
Jordy grew to like the whacks
And Uncle Isaac’s touching acts.

Isaac Chase thought that Jordy was cute
'Specially dressed in his new birthday suit,
Isaac squeezed his love handles
Then blew out his candles,
Bent over and let out a "Toot!"

Isaac pulled his nephew's pid
Sucked him dry then tongued his hole;
Nephew Jordy was just a kid
When he first straddled Isaac's pole.

Isaac rode Jordy bareback at seven
And cornholed him big-time at eight
He left him creampied at eleven
And went back home to masturbate.

Isaac groped little Jordy on Friday
Isaac sucked him off Saturday night
Isaac fucked Jordy six times on Sunday
Yeah, his weekend was going alright.

There's only on "t" in "Sonnet."

Isaac nailed Jordy on summer's day.
Beneath the willow by the backdoor gate:
He squeezed his lovebuds, then he had his way
But quick release cut all too short the date;
Sometime too hot the elder Chase becomes
And often spills his load ere passion's dimm'd;
Where is the joy in picking Jordy's plums
Or planting kisses in his grass untrimm'd
When shorts are cream'd and flaccid members fail?
Thou Jordy's willing, Ike gave up the ghost;
Still discontent, he fondles Jordy's tale,
For tis the ass enamors him the most:
So long as Isaac still has eyes to see,
He'll strap one one and stick it to Jordy.

Isaac chased boys when he was a toddler
He chased toddlers when he went school,
He made brownies with them as a young man,
Stirred their pudding until he would drool.

Isaac chased little boys on the playground
Although he was a middle aged man,
Donkey punched till his mudpacker turned brown
Tho he preferred to say it was tan.
The Jordy Factor
a poem by Will Dockery as told to NancyGene

Jordy’s a good sub for dead Lady K
He jiggles his ass and says it’s foreplay
with my massive moobs that even young Clay
has to admit that he’d like to sashay
in the chorus that kicks on LeGents parquet
floor where Jordy and I rolled ‘round in May
when he visited us to show us his fey
manners and though his family’s rich, hey,
I’m not too proud to say that I’d lay
him for free and he won’t have to pay
for extras like hi there’s, night-nights and oy veys.

Isaac Chase was a pixie I knew
Who diddled his widdle nephew,
Jordy pulled Isaac's pud
But his pud was a dud
And now poor Isaac's sack has turned blue.

When Jordy was just a wee laddie
He'd pull down his pants for his daddy,
Uncle paid him a call
And buggered him raw
And Jordy cried "Uncle Ike had me."

Isaac had a young nephew named Jordy
Whose tuchus he simply adored, he
Got Jordy to bare it
That he might then share it
And buggered the boy while he roared "Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!"

Uncle Isaac didn't care for his mommy,
His classmates found him a bit balmy;
It was said that the lad
Flicked his Bic for his dad:
Now chows on Nephew Jordy's shalomi.

Uncle Isaac desired little boys
He thought Jordy had exquisite poise
For a boy not yet ten
(He preferred boys to men)
And a man must have what he enjoys.

Little Jordy was sugar and spice
So his old uncle didn't think twice
About dipping his pole
In young Jordy's piehole,
Boston cream never seemed worth the price.

Uncle Isaac's an internet troll
Who fingered his nephew's dunghole,
Isaac stuck in his thumb
And made Jordy cum
And cried "Hola, Will -- I'm on a role!"

Isaac corked up Jordy Chase's bunghole,
Chocolate cha-cha'd til morning was nigh;
Gave his nephew a sloppy Picaso
He's a fart knockin', mud packin' guy.

Jordy Chase bought his uncle a butt plug
In the hope that he'd leave him alone;
Isaac plugged up his hole
And such joy filled his soul
That he plugged Jordy's hole with his own.

Uncle Isaac's a middle aged twit
Who's been found competently unfit,
For it's said he enjoys
Gallivanting with boys
And dipping his dick in their shit.

Isaac buggered Jordy in the bedroom
Isaac buggered Jordy in the car
Isaac buggered Jordy in the Men's Room
Of LeGents', Shadowville's favorite bar.

Uncle Isaac chased Jordy around his first crib,
Uncle Isaac "fed" Jordy and splooged on his bib,
Isaac changed Jordy's diapers for open-crotch hose
Then he buggered the toddler and jizzed on his nose.

Isaac cornswabbled his nephew's dinky
Pulled his joystick as if he played Pong;
Dipped his poo jabber till it got stinky
And nicknamed his dong "Donkey Kong."

When Jordan Chasescott was a lad
His Uncle Ike wanted him bad,
With the youth in his sights
Isaac gave up his nights
To baby sit straddling his 'nads.

Uncle Isaac was more like an ant
Who would crawl down young Jordy’s pants.
Jordy’d wiggle and scratch
But Isaac attached
Himself with coagulants.

Uncle Isaac ignored his niece, Judy,
Who didn’t have quite the same booty.
So Judy was spared,
And stood there and stared,
While Jordy got it in the patootie.

When Jordy went on Price is Right
His bung-hole shown like a nightlight.
He said it was Uncle
Ike and Garfuckles
Who implanted in him a Lite-Brite.

Uncle Isaac hosted family for Easter.
He told his sister he’d feast her.
They ate honey baked ham
And rack of young lamb
While Isaac dined on Jordy’s keister.

Isaac Chased Jordan Chasescott
From when he was just a young tot.
Isaac gave him a ball
and that wasn’t all,
for his undies had X marks the spot.

Uncle Isaac would pat Jordy’s buttock
And soothe him to sleep with some smut talk.
As Joey took vids
And entertained bids,
Little Jordy’s cradle would rock.

Uncle Isaac said let’s play Cowboys,
For riding is one of my joys.
I’ll be Roy, you’ll be Trigger,
As we gallop with vigor,
And Jordy, you’ll make whinny noise.

Isaac liked his nephew Jordy’s rear view,
From whence Jordy did his #2.
Jordy did #1
And Isaac said, son,
That not what we Commies doo-doo.

Jordan Chasescott had a gluteus--
That Uncle Isaac said was beauteous.
Isaac said drop your pants,
Give your Uncle a chance,
To give you a rub that’s salubrious.

Uncle Isaac and Jordan would read nursery rhymes
About Commies and sex and YouTube crimes.
Jordy learned about jails
And Joey’s porn sales
While Isaac performed pantomimes.


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 by: W.Dockery - Mon, 20 Feb 2023 23:33 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> W-Dockery wrote:

>> Dark Whirlwind

>> The months
>> somehow turned happy
>> in the dark whirlwind
>> of 1985.

>> Although doom was certain
>> earlier that year.
>> Before Summer came
>> and was now drawing to an end.

>> Hot Summer nights
>> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..

>> Dark Summer nights in a room
>> in Cabbagetown
>> looking over the river.

>> I got a call on the
>> mill speaker phone.
>> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>> saying come down to the front.

>> So I headed downstairs
>> about a city block
>> to the front gates.

>> Dark whirlwind night
>> Carlton Culverson
>> the Plant Two supervisor
>> met me in the break room
>> with coffee.

>> Carlton said
>> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>> let her keep on going
>> this time.

>> He reminded me
>> I could have any woman in the mill
>> I wanted.
>> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>> on her."

>> I waved him off.
>> held my head down.
>> with furrowed brow.
>> and stepped back into the fray.

>> Into the taxi cab.
>> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>> excitement and smiles
>> as I got in with her.

>> "Hey there, cab driver
>> kick it, man.
>> Get us to Cabbagetown
>> get us to River Avenue on time."

>> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)

>> ***
>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

> Second read one of the top ten Doc poems of the year,,,

Good evening, my friend, thanks again for the endorsement.

🙂

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 by: W.Dockery - Sat, 25 Feb 2023 04:18 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Dark Whirlwind

>> The months
>> somehow turned happy
>> in the dark whirlwind
>> of 1985.

>> Although doom was certain
>> earlier that year.
>> Before Summer came
>> and was now drawing to an end.

>> Hot Summer nights
>> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..

>> Dark Summer nights in a room
>> in Cabbagetown
>> looking over the river.

>> I got a call on the
>> mill speaker phone.
>> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>> saying come down to the front.

>> So I headed downstairs
>> about a city block
>> to the front gates.

>> Dark whirlwind night
>> Carlton Culverson
>> the Plant Two supervisor
>> met me in the break room
>> with coffee.

>> Carlton said
>> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>> let her keep on going
>> this time.

>> He reminded me
>> I could have any woman in the mill
>> I wanted.
>> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>> on her."

>> I waved him off.
>> held my head down.
>> with furrowed brow.
>> and stepped back into the fray.

>> Into the taxi cab.
>> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>> excitement and smiles
>> as I got in with her.

>> "Hey there, cab driver
>> kick it, man.
>> Get us to Cabbagetown
>> get us to River Avenue on time."

>> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)

>> ***
>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

> Second read, well on the way to classichood...

Good evening, thanks again for reading and commenting, Zod.

🙂

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 by: General-Zod - Mon, 27 Feb 2023 18:54 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> On Thursday, September 8, 2022 at 9:38:05 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> > On Friday, September 2, 2022 at 5:48:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> >> Will Dockery wrote:
>> >> >
>> >> > Dark Whirlwind
>> >>
>> >> > The months
>> >> > somehow turned happy
>> >> > in the dark whirlwind
>> >> > of 1985.
>> >>
>> >> > Although doom was certain
>> >> > earlier that year.
>> >> > Before Summer came
>> >> > and was now drawing to an end.
>> >>
>> >> > Hot Summer nights
>> >> > at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>> >>
>> >> > Dark Summer nights in a room
>> >> > in Cabbagetown
>> >> > looking over the river.
>> >>
>> >> > I got a call on the
>> >> > mill speaker phone.
>> >> > Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>> >> > saying come down to the front.
>> >>
>> >> > So I headed downstairs
>> >> > about a city block
>> >> > to the front gates.
>> >>
>> >> > Dark whirlwind night
>> >> > Carlton Culverson
>> >> > the Plant Two supervisor
>> >> > met me in the break room
>> >> > with coffee.
>> >>
>> >> > Carlton said
>> >> > "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>> >> > let her keep on going
>> >> > this time.
>> >>
>> >> > He reminded me
>> >> > I could have any woman in the mill
>> >> > I wanted.
>> >> > "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>> >> > on her."
>> >>
>> >> > I waved him off.
>> >> > held my head down.
>> >> > with furrowed brow.
>> >> > and stepped back into the fray.
>> >>
>> >> > Into the taxi cab.
>> >> > where she was in the back seat, crying.
>> >> > excitement and smiles
>> >> > as I got in with her.
>> >>
>> >> > "Hey there, cab driver
>> >> > kick it, man.
>> >> > Get us to Cabbagetown
>> >> > get us to River Avenue on time."
>> >>
>> >> > -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>> >>
>> >>
>> >> > ***
>> >> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> >> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>> >> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....
>>
>> > Thanks for reading and commenting, Zod.
>>
>>
>> Good day, I just read it again...!

> Good morning, thanks again for reading and commenting, old friend.

> 🙂

Good day to you Doc......!

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 by: W.Dockery - Wed, 1 Mar 2023 03:27 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>>>> On Friday, September 2, 2022 at 5:48:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>>>> >
>>>>> > Dark Whirlwind
>>>>>
>>>>> > The months
>>>>> > somehow turned happy
>>>>> > in the dark whirlwind
>>>>> > of 1985.
>>>>>
>>>>> > Although doom was certain
>>>>> > earlier that year.
>>>>> > Before Summer came
>>>>> > and was now drawing to an end.
>>>>>
>>>>> > Hot Summer nights
>>>>> > at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>>>>>
>>>>> > Dark Summer nights in a room
>>>>> > in Cabbagetown
>>>>> > looking over the river.
>>>>>
>>>>> > I got a call on the
>>>>> > mill speaker phone.
>>>>> > Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>>>>> > saying come down to the front.
>>>>>
>>>>> > So I headed downstairs
>>>>> > about a city block
>>>>> > to the front gates.
>>>>>
>>>>> > Dark whirlwind night
>>>>> > Carlton Culverson
>>>>> > the Plant Two supervisor
>>>>> > met me in the break room
>>>>> > with coffee.
>>>>>
>>>>> > Carlton said
>>>>> > "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>>>>> > let her keep on going
>>>>> > this time.
>>>>>
>>>>> > He reminded me
>>>>> > I could have any woman in the mill
>>>>> > I wanted.
>>>>> > "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>>>>> > on her."
>>>>>
>>>>> > I waved him off.
>>>>> > held my head down.
>>>>> > with furrowed brow.
>>>>> > and stepped back into the fray.
>>>>>
>>>>> > Into the taxi cab.
>>>>> > where she was in the back seat, crying.
>>>>> > excitement and smiles
>>>>> > as I got in with her.
>>>>>
>>>>> > "Hey there, cab driver
>>>>> > kick it, man.
>>>>> > Get us to Cabbagetown
>>>>> > get us to River Avenue on time."
>>>>>
>>>>> > -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> > ***
>>>>> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>>>>> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....

>>>> Thanks for reading and commenting, Zod.

>>>>

>>> Good day, I just read it again...!

>> Hello again, my friend.

>

> Howdy old pal...

I hope you and Mike are having a great evening, my friend.

🙂

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 by: General-Zod - Mon, 6 Mar 2023 23:38 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
> General-Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>> Dark Whirlwind

>>> The months
>>> somehow turned happy
>>> in the dark whirlwind
>>> of 1985.

>>> Although doom was certain
>>> earlier that year.
>>> Before Summer came
>>> and was now drawing to an end.

>>> Hot Summer nights
>>> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..

>>> Dark Summer nights in a room
>>> in Cabbagetown
>>> looking over the river.

>>> I got a call on the
>>> mill speaker phone.
>>> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>>> saying come down to the front.

>>> So I headed downstairs
>>> about a city block
>>> to the front gates.

>>> Dark whirlwind night
>>> Carlton Culverson
>>> the Plant Two supervisor
>>> met me in the break room
>>> with coffee.

>>> Carlton said
>>> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>>> let her keep on going
>>> this time.

>>> He reminded me
>>> I could have any woman in the mill
>>> I wanted.
>>> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>>> on her."

>>> I waved him off.
>>> held my head down.
>>> with furrowed brow.
>>> and stepped back into the fray.

>>> Into the taxi cab.
>>> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>>> excitement and smiles
>>> as I got in with her.

>>> "Hey there, cab driver
>>> kick it, man.
>>> Get us to Cabbagetown
>>> get us to River Avenue on time."

>>> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)

>>> ***
>>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

>> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....

> Good evening, more reality based poetry with a touch of fiction as needed.

Good day, another good read...!

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 by: W.Dockery - Tue, 7 Mar 2023 21:15 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> On Friday, September 2, 2022 at 5:48:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>> >
>>> > Dark Whirlwind
>>>
>>> > The months
>>> > somehow turned happy
>>> > in the dark whirlwind
>>> > of 1985.
>>>
>>> > Although doom was certain
>>> > earlier that year.
>>> > Before Summer came
>>> > and was now drawing to an end.
>>>
>>> > Hot Summer nights
>>> > at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>>>
>>> > Dark Summer nights in a room
>>> > in Cabbagetown
>>> > looking over the river.
>>>
>>> > I got a call on the
>>> > mill speaker phone.
>>> > Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>>> > saying come down to the front.
>>>
>>> > So I headed downstairs
>>> > about a city block
>>> > to the front gates.
>>>
>>> > Dark whirlwind night
>>> > Carlton Culverson
>>> > the Plant Two supervisor
>>> > met me in the break room
>>> > with coffee.
>>>
>>> > Carlton said
>>> > "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>>> > let her keep on going
>>> > this time.
>>>
>>> > He reminded me
>>> > I could have any woman in the mill
>>> > I wanted.
>>> > "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>>> > on her."
>>>
>>> > I waved him off.
>>> > held my head down.
>>> > with furrowed brow.
>>> > and stepped back into the fray.
>>>
>>> > Into the taxi cab.
>>> > where she was in the back seat, crying.
>>> > excitement and smiles
>>> > as I got in with her.
>>>
>>> > "Hey there, cab driver
>>> > kick it, man.
>>> > Get us to Cabbagetown
>>> > get us to River Avenue on time."
>>>
>>> > -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>>>
>>>
>>> > ***
>>> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>>> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....

>> Thanks for reading and commenting, Zod.

>

> Good day, I just read it again...!

Good afternoon Zod, thanks again.

:)

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 by: W-Dockery - Sat, 11 Mar 2023 07:05 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> On Friday, September 2, 2022 at 5:48:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>> >
>>> > Dark Whirlwind
>>>
>>> > The months
>>> > somehow turned happy
>>> > in the dark whirlwind
>>> > of 1985.
>>>
>>> > Although doom was certain
>>> > earlier that year.
>>> > Before Summer came
>>> > and was now drawing to an end.
>>>
>>> > Hot Summer nights
>>> > at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>>>
>>> > Dark Summer nights in a room
>>> > in Cabbagetown
>>> > looking over the river.
>>>
>>> > I got a call on the
>>> > mill speaker phone.
>>> > Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>>> > saying come down to the front.
>>>
>>> > So I headed downstairs
>>> > about a city block
>>> > to the front gates.
>>>
>>> > Dark whirlwind night
>>> > Carlton Culverson
>>> > the Plant Two supervisor
>>> > met me in the break room
>>> > with coffee.
>>>
>>> > Carlton said
>>> > "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>>> > let her keep on going
>>> > this time.
>>>
>>> > He reminded me
>>> > I could have any woman in the mill
>>> > I wanted.
>>> > "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>>> > on her."
>>>
>>> > I waved him off.
>>> > held my head down.
>>> > with furrowed brow.
>>> > and stepped back into the fray.
>>>
>>> > Into the taxi cab.
>>> > where she was in the back seat, crying.
>>> > excitement and smiles
>>> > as I got in with her.
>>>
>>> > "Hey there, cab driver
>>> > kick it, man.
>>> > Get us to Cabbagetown
>>> > get us to River Avenue on time."
>>>
>>> > -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>>>
>>>
>>> > ***
>>> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>>> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....

>> Thanks for reading and commenting, Zod.

>

> Good day, I just read it again...!

Good morning, much appreciated.

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 by: General-Zod - Mon, 13 Mar 2023 22:43 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> On Monday, March 13, 2023 at 5:48:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> > Dark Whirlwind
>>
>> > The months
>> > somehow turned happy
>> > in the dark whirlwind
>> > of 1985.
>>
>> > Although doom was certain
>> > earlier that year.
>> > Before Summer came
>> > and was now drawing to an end.
>>
>> > Hot Summer nights
>> > at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>>
>> > Dark Summer nights in a room
>> > in Cabbagetown
>> > looking over the river.
>>
>> > I got a call on the
>> > mill speaker phone.
>> > Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>> > saying come down to the front.
>>
>> > So I headed downstairs
>> > about a city block
>> > to the front gates.
>>
>> > Dark whirlwind night
>> > Carlton Culverson
>> > the Plant Two supervisor
>> > met me in the break room
>> > with coffee.
>>
>> > Carlton said
>> > "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>> > let her keep on going
>> > this time.
>>
>> > He reminded me
>> > I could have any woman in the mill
>> > I wanted.
>> > "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>> > on her."
>>
>> > I waved him off.
>> > held my head down.
>> > with furrowed brow.
>> > and stepped back into the fray.
>>
>> > Into the taxi cab.
>> > where she was in the back seat, crying.
>> > excitement and smiles
>> > as I got in with her.
>>
>> > "Hey there, cab driver
>> > kick it, man.
>> > Get us to Cabbagetown
>> > get us to River Avenue on time."
>>
>> > -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>>
>>
>> > ***
>> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....

> Thanks for reading and commenting, Zod.

>

Good day to you...!

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 by: W-Dockery - Wed, 15 Mar 2023 03:51 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Dark Whirlwind

>> The months
>> somehow turned happy
>> in the dark whirlwind
>> of 1985.

>> Although doom was certain
>> earlier that year.
>> Before Summer came
>> and was now drawing to an end.

>> Hot Summer nights
>> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..

>> Dark Summer nights in a room
>> in Cabbagetown
>> looking over the river.

>> I got a call on the
>> mill speaker phone.
>> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>> saying come down to the front.

>> So I headed downstairs
>> about a city block
>> to the front gates.

>> Dark whirlwind night
>> Carlton Culverson
>> the Plant Two supervisor
>> met me in the break room
>> with coffee.

>> Carlton said
>> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>> let her keep on going
>> this time.

>> He reminded me
>> I could have any woman in the mill
>> I wanted.
>> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>> on her."

>> I waved him off.
>> held my head down.
>> with furrowed brow.
>> and stepped back into the fray.

>> Into the taxi cab.
>> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>> excitement and smiles
>> as I got in with her.

>> "Hey there, cab driver
>> kick it, man.
>> Get us to Cabbagetown
>> get us to River Avenue on time."

>> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)

>> ***
>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

> possibly a classic....

Good evening, my friend.

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 by: W-Dockery - Sun, 19 Mar 2023 02:14 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> On Monday, March 13, 2023 at 5:48:14 PM UTC-4, Zod wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>>> > Dark Whirlwind
>>>
>>> > The months
>>> > somehow turned happy
>>> > in the dark whirlwind
>>> > of 1985.
>>>
>>> > Although doom was certain
>>> > earlier that year.
>>> > Before Summer came
>>> > and was now drawing to an end.
>>>
>>> > Hot Summer nights
>>> > at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>>>
>>> > Dark Summer nights in a room
>>> > in Cabbagetown
>>> > looking over the river.
>>>
>>> > I got a call on the
>>> > mill speaker phone.
>>> > Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>>> > saying come down to the front.
>>>
>>> > So I headed downstairs
>>> > about a city block
>>> > to the front gates.
>>>
>>> > Dark whirlwind night
>>> > Carlton Culverson
>>> > the Plant Two supervisor
>>> > met me in the break room
>>> > with coffee.
>>>
>>> > Carlton said
>>> > "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>>> > let her keep on going
>>> > this time.
>>>
>>> > He reminded me
>>> > I could have any woman in the mill
>>> > I wanted.
>>> > "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>>> > on her."
>>>
>>> > I waved him off.
>>> > held my head down.
>>> > with furrowed brow.
>>> > and stepped back into the fray.
>>>
>>> > Into the taxi cab.
>>> > where she was in the back seat, crying.
>>> > excitement and smiles
>>> > as I got in with her.
>>>
>>> > "Hey there, cab driver
>>> > kick it, man.
>>> > Get us to Cabbagetown
>>> > get us to River Avenue on time."
>>>
>>> > -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>>>
>>>
>>> > ***
>>> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>>> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....

>> Thanks for reading and commenting, Zod.

>>

> Good day to you...!

Good evening my friend.

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 by: Zod - Sun, 19 Mar 2023 20:51 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
> General-Zod wrote:
> > Will Dockery wrote:
>
> >> Dark Whirlwind
>
> >> The months
> >> somehow turned happy
> >> in the dark whirlwind
> >> of 1985.
>
> >> Although doom was certain
> >> earlier that year.
> >> Before Summer came
> >> and was now drawing to an end.
>
> >> Hot Summer nights
> >> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>
> >> Dark Summer nights in a room
> >> in Cabbagetown
> >> looking over the river.
>
> >> I got a call on the
> >> mill speaker phone.
> >> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
> >> saying come down to the front.
>
> >> So I headed downstairs
> >> about a city block
> >> to the front gates.
>
> >> Dark whirlwind night
> >> Carlton Culverson
> >> the Plant Two supervisor
> >> met me in the break room
> >> with coffee.
>
> >> Carlton said
> >> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
> >> let her keep on going
> >> this time.
>
> >> He reminded me
> >> I could have any woman in the mill
> >> I wanted.
> >> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
> >> on her."
>
> >> I waved him off.
> >> held my head down.
> >> with furrowed brow.
> >> and stepped back into the fray.
>
> >> Into the taxi cab.
> >> where she was in the back seat, crying.
> >> excitement and smiles
> >> as I got in with her.
>
> >> "Hey there, cab driver
> >> kick it, man.
> >> Get us to Cabbagetown
> >> get us to River Avenue on time."
>
> >> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>
>
> >> ***
> >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
> > possibly a classic....
>
> Good evening, my friend.

Thumbs up to you from the camp, old pal...!

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 by: W-Dockery - Wed, 22 Mar 2023 20:47 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>> General-Zod wrote:
>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> >> Dark Whirlwind
>>
>> >> The months
>> >> somehow turned happy
>> >> in the dark whirlwind
>> >> of 1985.
>>
>> >> Although doom was certain
>> >> earlier that year.
>> >> Before Summer came
>> >> and was now drawing to an end.
>>
>> >> Hot Summer nights
>> >> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>>
>> >> Dark Summer nights in a room
>> >> in Cabbagetown
>> >> looking over the river.
>>
>> >> I got a call on the
>> >> mill speaker phone.
>> >> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>> >> saying come down to the front.
>>
>> >> So I headed downstairs
>> >> about a city block
>> >> to the front gates.
>>
>> >> Dark whirlwind night
>> >> Carlton Culverson
>> >> the Plant Two supervisor
>> >> met me in the break room
>> >> with coffee.
>>
>> >> Carlton said
>> >> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>> >> let her keep on going
>> >> this time.
>>
>> >> He reminded me
>> >> I could have any woman in the mill
>> >> I wanted.
>> >> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>> >> on her."
>>
>> >> I waved him off.
>> >> held my head down.
>> >> with furrowed brow.
>> >> and stepped back into the fray.
>>
>> >> Into the taxi cab.
>> >> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>> >> excitement and smiles
>> >> as I got in with her.
>>
>> >> "Hey there, cab driver
>> >> kick it, man.
>> >> Get us to Cabbagetown
>> >> get us to River Avenue on time."
>>
>> >> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>>
>>
>> >> ***
>> >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>> > possibly a classic....
>>
>> Good evening, my friend.

> Thumbs up to you from the camp, old pal...!

Hello my friend, tell Mike I said hello.

:)

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 by: General-Zod - Sun, 26 Mar 2023 19:22 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:

> Zod wrote:
>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>> > Dark Whirlwind
>>
>> > The months
>> > somehow turned happy
>> > in the dark whirlwind
>> > of 1985.
>>
>> > Although doom was certain
>> > earlier that year.
>> > Before Summer came
>> > and was now drawing to an end.
>>
>> > Hot Summer nights
>> > at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>>
>> > Dark Summer nights in a room
>> > in Cabbagetown
>> > looking over the river.
>>
>> > I got a call on the
>> > mill speaker phone.
>> > Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>> > saying come down to the front.
>>
>> > So I headed downstairs
>> > about a city block
>> > to the front gates.
>>
>> > Dark whirlwind night
>> > Carlton Culverson
>> > the Plant Two supervisor
>> > met me in the break room
>> > with coffee.
>>
>> > Carlton said
>> > "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>> > let her keep on going
>> > this time.
>>
>> > He reminded me
>> > I could have any woman in the mill
>> > I wanted.
>> > "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>> > on her."
>>
>> > I waved him off.
>> > held my head down.
>> > with furrowed brow.
>> > and stepped back into the fray.
>>
>> > Into the taxi cab.
>> > where she was in the back seat, crying.
>> > excitement and smiles
>> > as I got in with her.
>>
>> > "Hey there, cab driver
>> > kick it, man.
>> > Get us to Cabbagetown
>> > get us to River Avenue on time."
>>
>> > -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>>
>>
>> > ***
>> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....

> Thanks for reading and commenting, Zod.

Good DAY to YOU old pal....!!

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 by: W-Dockery - Wed, 29 Mar 2023 03:46 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> Dark Whirlwind

>> The months
>> somehow turned happy
>> in the dark whirlwind
>> of 1985.

>> Although doom was certain
>> earlier that year.
>> Before Summer came
>> and was now drawing to an end.

>> Hot Summer nights
>> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..

>> Dark Summer nights in a room
>> in Cabbagetown
>> looking over the river.

>> I got a call on the
>> mill speaker phone.
>> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>> saying come down to the front.

>> So I headed downstairs
>> about a city block
>> to the front gates.

>> Dark whirlwind night
>> Carlton Culverson
>> the Plant Two supervisor
>> met me in the break room
>> with coffee.

>> Carlton said
>> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>> let her keep on going
>> this time.

>> He reminded me
>> I could have any woman in the mill
>> I wanted.
>> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>> on her."

>> I waved him off.
>> held my head down.
>> with furrowed brow.
>> and stepped back into the fray.

>> Into the taxi cab.
>> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>> excitement and smiles
>> as I got in with her.

>> "Hey there, cab driver
>> kick it, man.
>> Get us to Cabbagetown
>> get us to River Avenue on time."

>> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)

>> ***
>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....

Good evening, thanks again for reading and commenting.

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 by: W.Dockery - Tue, 25 Jul 2023 20:08 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>> General-Zod wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>> Dark Whirlwind

>>>> The months
>>>> somehow turned happy
>>>> in the dark whirlwind
>>>> of 1985.

>>>> Although doom was certain
>>>> earlier that year.
>>>> Before Summer came
>>>> and was now drawing to an end.

>>>> Hot Summer nights
>>>> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..

>>>> Dark Summer nights in a room
>>>> in Cabbagetown
>>>> looking over the river.

>>>> I got a call on the
>>>> mill speaker phone.
>>>> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>>>> saying come down to the front.

>>>> So I headed downstairs
>>>> about a city block
>>>> to the front gates.

>>>> Dark whirlwind night
>>>> Carlton Culverson
>>>> the Plant Two supervisor
>>>> met me in the break room
>>>> with coffee.

>>>> Carlton said
>>>> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>>>> let her keep on going
>>>> this time.

>>>> He reminded me
>>>> I could have any woman in the mill
>>>> I wanted.
>>>> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>>>> on her."

>>>> I waved him off.
>>>> held my head down.
>>>> with furrowed brow.
>>>> and stepped back into the fray.

>>>> Into the taxi cab.
>>>> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>>>> excitement and smiles
>>>> as I got in with her.

>>>> "Hey there, cab driver
>>>> kick it, man.
>>>> Get us to Cabbagetown
>>>> get us to River Avenue on time."

>>>> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)

>>>> ***
>>>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

>
>> More reality based poetry with a touch of fiction as needed.

> Good day, another good read...!

Good afternoon, thanks again for the nod.

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 by: W.Dockery - Wed, 2 Aug 2023 02:41 UTC

Zod wrote:
> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>> > Dark Whirlwind
>>>
>>> > The months
>>> > somehow turned happy
>>> > in the dark whirlwind
>>> > of 1985.
>>>
>>> > Although doom was certain
>>> > earlier that year.
>>> > Before Summer came
>>> > and was now drawing to an end.
>>>
>>> > Hot Summer nights
>>> > at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>>>
>>> > Dark Summer nights in a room
>>> > in Cabbagetown
>>> > looking over the river.
>>>
>>> > I got a call on the
>>> > mill speaker phone.
>>> > Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>>> > saying come down to the front.
>>>
>>> > So I headed downstairs
>>> > about a city block
>>> > to the front gates.
>>>
>>> > Dark whirlwind night
>>> > Carlton Culverson
>>> > the Plant Two supervisor
>>> > met me in the break room
>>> > with coffee.
>>>
>>> > Carlton said
>>> > "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>>> > let her keep on going
>>> > this time.
>>>
>>> > He reminded me
>>> > I could have any woman in the mill
>>> > I wanted.
>>> > "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>>> > on her."
>>>
>>> > I waved him off.
>>> > held my head down.
>>> > with furrowed brow.
>>> > and stepped back into the fray.
>>>
>>> > Into the taxi cab.
>>> > where she was in the back seat, crying.
>>> > excitement and smiles
>>> > as I got in with her.
>>>
>>> > "Hey there, cab driver
>>> > kick it, man.
>>> > Get us to Cabbagetown
>>> > get us to River Avenue on time."
>>>
>>> > -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>>>
>>>
>>> > ***
>>> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>
> Quite excellent

Good evening, thanks again.

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 by: General-Zod - Sat, 5 Aug 2023 20:56 UTC

Will Dockery wrote:
>
> Dark Whirlwind

> The months
> somehow turned happy
> in the dark whirlwind
> of 1985.

> Although doom was certain
> earlier that year.
> Before Summer came
> and was now drawing to an end.

> Hot Summer nights
> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..

> Dark Summer nights in a room
> in Cabbagetown
> looking over the river.

> I got a call on the
> mill speaker phone.
> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
> saying come down to the front.

> So I headed downstairs
> about a city block
> to the front gates.

> Dark whirlwind night
> Carlton Culverson
> the Plant Two supervisor
> met me in the break room
> with coffee.

> Carlton said
> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
> let her keep on going
> this time.

> He reminded me
> I could have any woman in the mill
> I wanted.
> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
> on her."

> I waved him off.
> held my head down.
> with furrowed brow.
> and stepped back into the fray.

> Into the taxi cab.
> where she was in the back seat, crying.
> excitement and smiles
> as I got in with her.

> "Hey there, cab driver
> kick it, man.
> Get us to Cabbagetown
> get us to River Avenue on time."

> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)

> ***
> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

This was a strange time to be you, Doc, I can imagine, from the poem...

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 by: W.Dockery - Tue, 8 Aug 2023 18:26 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>> General-Zod wrote:
>> > Will Dockery wrote:
>>
>> >> Dark Whirlwind
>>
>> >> The months
>> >> somehow turned happy
>> >> in the dark whirlwind
>> >> of 1985.
>>
>> >> Although doom was certain
>> >> earlier that year.
>> >> Before Summer came
>> >> and was now drawing to an end.
>>
>> >> Hot Summer nights
>> >> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>>
>> >> Dark Summer nights in a room
>> >> in Cabbagetown
>> >> looking over the river.
>>
>> >> I got a call on the
>> >> mill speaker phone.
>> >> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>> >> saying come down to the front.
>>
>> >> So I headed downstairs
>> >> about a city block
>> >> to the front gates.
>>
>> >> Dark whirlwind night
>> >> Carlton Culverson
>> >> the Plant Two supervisor
>> >> met me in the break room
>> >> with coffee.
>>
>> >> Carlton said
>> >> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>> >> let her keep on going
>> >> this time.
>>
>> >> He reminded me
>> >> I could have any woman in the mill
>> >> I wanted.
>> >> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>> >> on her."
>>
>> >> I waved him off.
>> >> held my head down.
>> >> with furrowed brow.
>> >> and stepped back into the fray.
>>
>> >> Into the taxi cab.
>> >> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>> >> excitement and smiles
>> >> as I got in with her.
>>
>> >> "Hey there, cab driver
>> >> kick it, man.
>> >> Get us to Cabbagetown
>> >> get us to River Avenue on time."
>>
>> >> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>>
>>
>> >> ***
>> >> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>> >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>> > possibly a classic....
>>
>> Good evening, my friend.

> Thumbs up to you from the camp, old pal...!

Good afternoon, hope you guys are the camp are having a great day.

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 by: W.Dockery - Sat, 12 Aug 2023 22:20 UTC

General-Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>> Dark Whirlwind

>>>> The months
>>>> somehow turned happy
>>>> in the dark whirlwind
>>>> of 1985.

>>>> Although doom was certain
>>>> earlier that year.
>>>> Before Summer came
>>>> and was now drawing to an end.

>>>> Hot Summer nights
>>>> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..

>>>> Dark Summer nights in a room
>>>> in Cabbagetown
>>>> looking over the river.

>>>> I got a call on the
>>>> mill speaker phone.
>>>> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>>>> saying come down to the front.

>>>> So I headed downstairs
>>>> about a city block
>>>> to the front gates.

>>>> Dark whirlwind night
>>>> Carlton Culverson
>>>> the Plant Two supervisor
>>>> met me in the break room
>>>> with coffee.

>>>> Carlton said
>>>> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>>>> let her keep on going
>>>> this time.

>>>> He reminded me
>>>> I could have any woman in the mill
>>>> I wanted.
>>>> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>>>> on her."

>>>> I waved him off.
>>>> held my head down.
>>>> with furrowed brow.
>>>> and stepped back into the fray.

>>>> Into the taxi cab.
>>>> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>>>> excitement and smiles
>>>> as I got in with her.

>>>> "Hey there, cab driver
>>>> kick it, man.
>>>> Get us to Cabbagetown
>>>> get us to River Avenue on time."

>>>> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)

>>>> ***
>>>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

>>

> Good day, another good read...!

Good afternoon my friend.

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 by: W.Dockery - Thu, 17 Aug 2023 14:44 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:
>> General-Zod wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>>> Dark Whirlwind

>>>> The months
>>>> somehow turned happy
>>>> in the dark whirlwind
>>>> of 1985.

>>>> Although doom was certain
>>>> earlier that year.
>>>> Before Summer came
>>>> and was now drawing to an end.

>>>> Hot Summer nights
>>>> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..

>>>> Dark Summer nights in a room
>>>> in Cabbagetown
>>>> looking over the river.

>>>> I got a call on the
>>>> mill speaker phone.
>>>> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>>>> saying come down to the front.

>>>> So I headed downstairs
>>>> about a city block
>>>> to the front gates.

>>>> Dark whirlwind night
>>>> Carlton Culverson
>>>> the Plant Two supervisor
>>>> met me in the break room
>>>> with coffee.

>>>> Carlton said
>>>> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>>>> let her keep on going
>>>> this time.

>>>> He reminded me
>>>> I could have any woman in the mill
>>>> I wanted.
>>>> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>>>> on her."

>>>> I waved him off.
>>>> held my head down.
>>>> with furrowed brow.
>>>> and stepped back into the fray.

>>>> Into the taxi cab.
>>>> where she was in the back seat, crying.
>>>> excitement and smiles
>>>> as I got in with her.

>>>> "Hey there, cab driver
>>>> kick it, man.
>>>> Get us to Cabbagetown
>>>> get us to River Avenue on time."

>>>> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)

>>>> ***
>>>> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>>> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

>>> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....

>> Good evening, more reality based poetry with a touch of fiction as needed.

> Good day, another good read...!

Hello there my friend, thanks again.

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Will Dockery wrote:
>
> Dark Whirlwind
>
> The months
> somehow turned happy
> in the dark whirlwind
> of 1985.
>
> Although doom was certain
> earlier that year.
> Before Summer came
> and was now drawing to an end.
>
> Hot Summer nights
> at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>
> Dark Summer nights in a room
> in Cabbagetown
> looking over the river.
>
> I got a call on the
> mill speaker phone.
> Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
> saying come down to the front.
>
> So I headed downstairs
> about a city block
> to the front gates.
>
> Dark whirlwind night
> Carlton Culverson
> the Plant Two supervisor
> met me in the break room
> with coffee.
>
> Carlton said
> "Don't fall for it, Doc,
> let her keep on going
> this time.
>
> He reminded me
> I could have any woman in the mill
> I wanted.
> "Don't ruin the rest of your life
> on her."
>
> I waved him off.
> held my head down.
> with furrowed brow.
> and stepped back into the fray.
>
> Into the taxi cab.
> where she was in the back seat, crying.
> excitement and smiles
> as I got in with her.
>
> "Hey there, cab driver
> kick it, man.
> Get us to Cabbagetown
> get us to River Avenue on time."
>
> -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>
>
> ***
> From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html

Again, a poem that holds up well on another read...

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 by: W.Dockery - Tue, 22 Aug 2023 15:58 UTC

Zod wrote:

> Will Dockery wrote:

>> Zod wrote:
>>> Will Dockery wrote:
>
>>> > Dark Whirlwind
>>>
>>> > The months
>>> > somehow turned happy
>>> > in the dark whirlwind
>>> > of 1985.
>>>
>>> > Although doom was certain
>>> > earlier that year.
>>> > Before Summer came
>>> > and was now drawing to an end.
>>>
>>> > Hot Summer nights
>>> > at the Shadowville Spinning Mill..
>>>
>>> > Dark Summer nights in a room
>>> > in Cabbagetown
>>> > looking over the river.
>>>
>>> > I got a call on the
>>> > mill speaker phone.
>>> > Billy Yancy in the Supply Room
>>> > saying come down to the front.
>>>
>>> > So I headed downstairs
>>> > about a city block
>>> > to the front gates.
>>>
>>> > Dark whirlwind night
>>> > Carlton Culverson
>>> > the Plant Two supervisor
>>> > met me in the break room
>>> > with coffee.
>>>
>>> > Carlton said
>>> > "Don't fall for it, Doc,
>>> > let her keep on going
>>> > this time.
>>>
>>> > He reminded me
>>> > I could have any woman in the mill
>>> > I wanted.
>>> > "Don't ruin the rest of your life
>>> > on her."
>>>
>>> > I waved him off.
>>> > held my head down.
>>> > with furrowed brow.
>>> > and stepped back into the fray.
>>>
>>> > Into the taxi cab.
>>> > where she was in the back seat, crying.
>>> > excitement and smiles
>>> > as I got in with her.
>>>
>>> > "Hey there, cab driver
>>> > kick it, man.
>>> > Get us to Cabbagetown
>>> > get us to River Avenue on time."
>>>
>>> > -Will Dockery (6-9-21)
>>>
>>>
>>> > ***
>>> > From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
>>> > https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/06/dark-whirlwind.html
>>> Quite excellent and possibly a classic....

>> Thanks for reading and commenting, Zod.

>

> Good day, I just read it again...!

Good afternoon, thanks again for the read.

;)


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